Read chapter four of The Lion the Witch and the Wardrobe.
Make notes on what happens to Edmund when he arrives in
Narnia.
Use the writing frame below to plan Edmund’s recount of his
arrival in Narnia.
Check it with a partner and then write the recount out neatly.
Start with an
introduction
Include who, where,
when.
Edmund saw the
queen ...

Write your ideas here:

Paragraph 2
What did Edmund do
on meeting the
Queen?
Include a connective.
e.g. first
Paragraph 3
What happened next?
Start the paragraph
with a connective
e.g. after, before, then
Paragraph 4
What else happened?
Use another different
connective to start
your paragraph
Can you write
another
paragraph?

Finish with a
conclusion
How did Edmund’s
visit end?
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