B. Choose the one best answer to each question.
1. Sentence 2. When we enter, we generally move in the direction the store has chosen, down the “power” aisle. What correction should be made to sentence 2?
a. replace When with Because
b. insert a comma after enter
c. insert a comma after generally
2. Sentences 4, 5, and 6. Then we stand in the checkout line, and we see more impulse buys. We see magazines. We see candy and other small items.The most effective way to combine sentences 4,5 and 6 would be:
a. Then we stand and see…
b. Then we stand in the checkout line, and we see more impulse buys such as magazines
c. Then we stand in the checkout line, and we see more impulse buys seeing
3. Sentences 7 and 8. Even though we may have wanted only a quart of milk. We’ll probably walk out with several items. Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of the text?
a. milk, and we’ll
b. milk, so we’ll
c. milk, we’ll
4. Sentences 9 and 10. We can avoid impulse buying. We have to understand why we do it. The best way to combine sentence 9 and 10 should be:
a. buying, and we
b. buying if we understand
c. buying although we do not
The following cohesive devices are used in sentences:
▪ To compare: also, similarly, likewise, compared with
▪ To add information: and, also, furthermore, moreover, too
▪ To give an example: for example, for instance, such as, namely
▪ For sequencing of ideas: First, second, next, then, after, lastly, as a result
▪ For contrasting ideas: in comparison, in contrast, instead, on the contrary
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